http://vladimirpotapov.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] vladimirpotapov.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] seminarist 2010-09-05 08:05 am (UTC)

На мой вкус, первую запятую нужно снять, а вторую оставить.
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